' Quel'Thalas' is misspelled as 'Qual'Thalas' in the second chapter.

But there is a darker secret behind Dalaran's dire situation, and Aodhan might be the only one who can end the schemes that threaten the city, becoming the hero his family never thought he could be. The cunning older mage, after escaping from Dalaran's prison, takes the impressionable Aodhan under his wing, and together they work to prevent the city's destruction. Although far from home, the young mage finds help from a relative who has been close by all along - Crevan, his magic-wielding uncle. After his controlling father forbids him to practice magic, Aodhan flees to study the arcane arts in the city of Dalaran.ДЄodhan's dream of becoming a powerful spellcaster is violently interrupted when a host of blue dragons lays siege to Dalaran. He's thin, bookish, and desperately wants to be a mage. I suggest reading from chapters 70-100, for a 5/10 read.Aodhan comes from a lineage that includes some of Azeroth's most heroic paladins and warriors, but the whip-smart young man is not built for physical combat. The secret organization does make it go from a 2 to a 3, since medeocre is better than straight-up bad.ДЇrom what I can see, the author does improve further on.

The second is someone who assaults cripples in broad daylight, in an urban city, a place previously filled with flying commuters and pedestrians, so conveniently devoid of witnesses. The first is someone who's supposed to be smart and liked by the class, yet acts in the mannar of someone above the law and above criticism. Yet for some reason, his classmates care about grades despite this, which leads to 'villains.' They suck. In the other world, he places his faith into his awakening and, as stated previously, is lucky enough to get a super powerful talent. He starts of in meloncholy at his life, studying in a good highschool depite being untalented. The main character has a fairly likable personality, but other parts drive the score down to 3. The characters areВ the same, given very little effort. As if a frame from an anime were used, it feels hastily drawn. The knowledge he was meant to learn because useless in the form of bs god-given talent. The main character had terrible grades in both lives, yet because of his innate magic skill, he had the standing of a gold-metal olympian, except instead of going to a limit that even a normal man can see, he shows the ability to shock multiple people, likely able to defeat 10-20 men 6 months after awakening. Control magic by concentrating,' and that was EVERYTHING. There was a book with only the text that said something like, 'meditate to strengthen magic. What the author does instead, is completely make university pointless. You would think that in such an advanced world, magic, like physical strength and skill, would be foregone in favor of universities teaching the application of magic, the aquisition of magic, and specialization of magic in very specific fields (or at least an implication). The thing which sticks out the most, however, is how the main character gets by in the beginning. A dedicated bit which brings the reader's focus on it, but not enough effort for the reader to enjoy it. Jee-Han loves gaming more than anything, but it still comes as a shock when one day, he suddenly acquires a mysterious power that superimposes RPG characteristics onto the real world Tasks like going to the store for his mother initiate experience-earning quests, and everyone around the boy display levels and stats above their heads. The author's attempt is limited to how accidents are fixed, how electronics now work with magic, and that's it. No consideration for how individual strength rivalling ten or a hundred thousand men will affect a democracy.

No consideration for how magical beasts will impact an urbanized society. Like many average writers, there's no consideration for howВ the magic system will impact education. The author makes a half-wit effort to make a good world.

The worldbuilding is below average, I'd say worse than other urban fantasies. It executes on this like any other similar series. The plot is fairly generic, the concept of a secret organization that for some reason has dedicated membored bent of destruction despite a zero-witness policy and terrible goals with no good reason. There's nothing unique about it, so it's up to the plot and worldbuilding to pick it up. The below are examples which persist in new mutated forms throught the book. 'Spoilers,' loosly defined, for the first 4 chapters. Oh boy, if you get past the first 30 or so chapters, you might find this enjoyable.

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